Charlene the bat

Kyo my friend <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> What time is it?Critique time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> so...lets roll XD

Lets start with the vision...well, I think you got what you wanted, after all, it looks very nice and colorful. I like the combination of the colors. The pose, please!That pose looks awesome but the foot behind the leg doesn´t look so good...I thought it was part of the backround. I think you should try to make look more...like a shoe?

The clothes are awesome.I love it(maybe beacause a girl hehe). The shorts look great but the white little stuff on them, what is it?Is it part of the short or its to make it look like torn?You should try to make that look more realistic.

The hair.The hair looks very very nice. But the pink with black piece of hair that she has..it doesn´t look much like hair. You can difference it if you watch the image for a while but just at glancing at it, anyone can think that it´s a hair ornament or something...just saying.The rest is just perfect.I´ll give you 3.5 in Vision.

Now, originality.The pic looks original, but I afraid I have to give you less credit because th character is not yours but I will take in acount that it is a gift(a very precious one), so you have 4 in Originality.

Now, in Technique. Kyo, I see that you are not improving in your art.You should try to give some more effect and effort on your drawings. But the technique of shading and lighting you´ve got, is something amazing and very nice.I will give you 3.5 in Technique.

And...Impact. Well, this drawing surprised me, I can say it, because it is true. I like the position of her hands and her clothe(I already said that.Silly me) I will take a lot in account that this is for a friend and I`m sure she really liked it.I will give you 4.5 in Impact.

Well, my critique is finished, tell me if I sounded rude, it was not my intention. Have a nice day and God bless you.^^